
At 1,138 pages, Stephen King’s It goes to epic length to deliver horror. The novel’s eponymous monster adopts various guises in its effort to terrorize/tenderize Its prey: first comes the frights, then the bites. Given its commitment to scare tactics, the narrative unsurprisingly features innumerable instances of characters experiencing stark fear. One wonders how King is able to avoid repeating himself. After all, there are only so many physiological responses to fear, and most of these (e.g., a pounding heart, icy spine, stiffened or whitened hair) have long since grown familiar to readers. The author strings together many of these together early on, as Georgie ventures into the dark cellar, with “his heart a warm, beating hammer in his throat, the hair on the nape of his neck standing at attention, his eyes hot, his hands cold” (7; all page numbers are from the first edition hardcover). It almost seems as if King is working to get the cliches out of the way, because time and again after this he composes more imaginative passages that capture his characters’ afraid state. Here are a baker’s dozen examples of such descriptive treats:
1 & 2. Chapter 3 Six Phone Calls (1985)
When Stanley Uris ominously locks himself in the bathroom, his frightened wife Patty has panic come “into the front of her mind like a prowler walking quietly up a flight of stairs” (56). King provides a vivid image of mounting terror, invoking a home-invasion scenario that easily creates unease. Patty’s increasingly overwrought state is emphasized a few paragraphs later: “Panic was rising in her mind again–it was like bitter black coffee threatening to overflow the rim of a cup” (57). One can almost taste the poor woman’s trepidation, and the use of the word “threatening” underscores the sense of impending unpleasantness.
3. Chapter 3 Six Phone Calls (1985)
When Mike Hanlon reaches out with a request to return to Derry, Richie Tozier’s repressed childhood terror surges to consciousness: “You’re not Rich ‘Records’ Tozier down there [in the cracked-open vaults of memory]; down there you’re just Richie ‘Four-Eyes’ Tozier and you’re with your buddies and you’re so scared it feels like your balls are turning to Welch’s grape jelly” (64). King strikes a calculated low blow here; the male reader, especially, cringes at the transmutation conjured by the simile. On a more sophisticated level, the resort to the second-person signals a desperate attempt at disassociation.
4. Chapter 3 Six Phone Calls (1985)
Likewise summoned by Mike to return to his hometown, Eddie Kaspbrak envisions a late-night train ride north toward Derry, “his suitcase overhead and his tote-bag full of nostrums between his feet, the fear sitting on his chest like a rancid Vicks-pack” (92). The notion of something frightful sitting heavily on the chest suggests the night terrors horrifically depicted by painter Henry Fuseli in “The Nightmare.” And the image of medicine-gone-bad is quite fitting for Eddie, who was reared by a rotten, hypochondriacal mother.
5. Chapter 3 Six Phone Calls (1985)
After Bill Denbrough gets his respective call to attend the Losers’ Club reunion, his fear manifests verbally via the sudden return of his stutter, and epidermally as he realizes the flesh of his arms “had humped into gooseflesh. Not little bumps but huge white knobs like insect eggs” (133). The trite image of horripilated skin is rendered freshly chilling by the association with parasitic infection. “Insect eggs” also prefigures the climactic encounter with It’s spidery progeny.
6. Chapter 11 Walking Tours
Beverly Marsh wonders if her encounter with Mrs. Kersh/Pennywise was just a dream, but then spots the dirt on her clothes and the chocolate on her fingers. The verification of a nightmarish experience causes Beverly to flee her old apartment: she walks “away fast, her face hot, her back cold as ice, her eyeballs seeming to pulse in and out with the rapid thud of her heart” (574). Once again, King takes the familiar signs of fear and twists them in a different direction. Horror has been known to make eyeballs pop, but they aren’t supposed to pulse! The strange sensation highlights the uncanniness to which Beverly has just been subjected.
7. Chapter 14 The Album
After young Mike speaks of a run-in with a giant bird, the shocked “Stan looked as if someone had clipped him with a brick. His face had gone so pale it was the color of muted November sunlight” (713). The prosaic is made poetic: what a beautiful, evocative description of turning ashen.
8. Chapter 14 The Album
Stan is similarly overwhelmed when a taunting, threatening Pennywise invokes the dead boys from the Derry Standpipe: Stan’s “eyes bulged above bruised-looking crescents of skin–shockflesh, Bill thought randomly, and it was a word he would use in a novel twelve years later, with no idea where it had come from, simply taking it, as writers take the right word at the right time, as a simple gift from that outer space (otherspace) where the good words come from sometimes” (731). The horror-writer-in-the-making Bill conjures a poignant neologism–shockflesh sounds much more daunting a condition than mere gooseflesh. And this passage overall forms a nice riff on the film title It Came from Outer Space.
9. Chapter 17 Another One of the Missing: The Death of Patrick Hockstetter
Beverly is frightened when she stumbles upon the scene of naked teens making flamethrowers of their flatulence. Here nemeses Henry Bowers, Victor Criss, and Belch Huggins are all there, but worst of all is the quintessentially creepy Patrick Hockstetter: “‘Ten feet,’ Patrick giggled (just the sound of it made Bev feel cold and revolted, as if she had seen a worm squirm its way out of her salad)” (820). The precise, grotesque image facilely elicits a visceral response, allowing the reader to share in Beverly’s revulsion.
10. Chapter 17 Another One of the Missing: The Death of Patrick Hockstetter
Following the apparent crib-death of baby Avery, Mr. Hockstetter “looked down and saw a pair of tracks on the hardwood floor. They had been made by the snow melting off Patrick’s yellow rubber boots. He looked at them, and a dreadful thought rose briefly in his mind like bad gas from a deep mineshaft” (828). The simile perfectly expresses the surfacing of an unhealthy thought from the depths of the psyche–the terrible consideration that the only five-year-old Patrick is a sociopathic fratricide.
11. Chapter 19 In the Watches of the Night
Catching glimpse of a pumping-station in the Barrens and knowing that it leads to It, Henry Bowers is thoroughly unnerved: “His skin seemed to be tightening, his eyes widening so that they were able to see more and more; it seemed he could feel the tiny hairs in his ears stirring and moving like kelp in an underwater tidal flow” (945-6). That last image is at once wonderfully original and nearly vertigo-inducing.
12. Chapter 19 In the Watches of the Night
For Eddie, fear and pain go hand in hand, thanks to the dread of being hurt instilled in him by his overprotective mother. An appropriate juxtaposition occurs, then, after an adult Eddie has his arm broken by Henry (whom Eddie then manages to kill), and Eddie dials the hotel’s front desk (so he can be connected to Bill’s room): “The hand holding the phone was trembling in convulsive little bursts. There was a nest of waspy, rotten-ugly singing in his other arm” (969). Synesthesia to buzz about, as these aural images strongly convey a tactile sensation.
13. Chapter 20 The Circle Closes
About to descend below the city for a final battle with It, Bill is poleaxed by the discovery of a purse belonging to his wife Audra (until then, presumed to be residing safely in England): “All the spit was gone out of his mouth, leaving his tongue and inner cheeks as smooth and dry as chrome” (1004). Instead of settling for a standard reaction (i.e. growing incontinently cotton-mouthed), King extends the description so that the reader can sense Bill’s fear in all its metallic unpalatableness.
There are scores of other descriptions of being scared in the novel that might have been cited here, but these thirteen examples provide testimony of what a deftly constructed fear factory It is.